Difference between revisions of "Talk:Birds of Prey"
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| − | I removed the material that I had initially added, in favor of a link to an archive webpage with the | + | I removed the material that I had initially added, in favor of a link to an archive webpage with the B.O.P. information on it. Enjoy. |
I also cleaned up the main text block; I added what I know about the formation of the two companies, and about the coincidental similarities of each. I took out sections which duplicated the information that is now accessible through the archive link, and I corrected the constant misspelling of the word "shrike;" it was being consistently written as "shirke," which is incorrect. | I also cleaned up the main text block; I added what I know about the formation of the two companies, and about the coincidental similarities of each. I took out sections which duplicated the information that is now accessible through the archive link, and I corrected the constant misspelling of the word "shrike;" it was being consistently written as "shirke," which is incorrect. | ||
Revision as of 15:10, 21 September 2013
I removed the material that I had initially added, in favor of a link to an archive webpage with the B.O.P. information on it. Enjoy.
I also cleaned up the main text block; I added what I know about the formation of the two companies, and about the coincidental similarities of each. I took out sections which duplicated the information that is now accessible through the archive link, and I corrected the constant misspelling of the word "shrike;" it was being consistently written as "shirke," which is incorrect.
Lastly, I corrected the heraldry by displaying BOTH devices, and by making the Wetlands B.O.P. heraldry the same size as the VSR heraldry.
I hope that everyone is happy with these changes; they were made in the spirit of making this entry more accurate, and more concise.
