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| − | + | I removed the material that I had initially added, in favor of a link to an archive webpage with the B.O.P. information on it. Enjoy. | |
| − | + | I also cleaned up the main text block; I added what I know about the formation of the two companies, and about the coincidental similarities of each. I took out sections which duplicated the information that is now accessible through the archive link, and I corrected the constant misspelling of the word "shrike;" it was being consistently written as "shirke," which is incorrect. | |
| − | + | Lastly, I corrected the heraldry by displaying BOTH devices, and by making the Wetlands B.O.P. heraldry the same size as the VSR heraldry. | |
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| + | I hope that everyone is happy with these changes; they were made in the spirit of making this entry more accurate, and more concise. | ||
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| + | <br>Made changes to the member list, because a bunch of them held ranks that don't exist. I corrected these ranks to the closest REAL rank, according to the information given; i.e., someone claiming to hold "Ebon Shrike" would be corrected to "Ebon Kite," which is the closest rank available, etc. If you want to call yourself something different, i.e., Ebon Raven, Ebon Eagle, etc., then you should add that to the end of your rank as an AKA, like so: <br><br>Charlie The Destroyer - '''Order of the Kite''' [Middle Grade Officer] AKA The Ebon Eagle of Moon Ridge.<br> | ||
Latest revision as of 01:08, 24 September 2013
I removed the material that I had initially added, in favor of a link to an archive webpage with the B.O.P. information on it. Enjoy.
I also cleaned up the main text block; I added what I know about the formation of the two companies, and about the coincidental similarities of each. I took out sections which duplicated the information that is now accessible through the archive link, and I corrected the constant misspelling of the word "shrike;" it was being consistently written as "shirke," which is incorrect.
Lastly, I corrected the heraldry by displaying BOTH devices, and by making the Wetlands B.O.P. heraldry the same size as the VSR heraldry.
I hope that everyone is happy with these changes; they were made in the spirit of making this entry more accurate, and more concise.
Made changes to the member list, because a bunch of them held ranks that don't exist. I corrected these ranks to the closest REAL rank, according to the information given; i.e., someone claiming to hold "Ebon Shrike" would be corrected to "Ebon Kite," which is the closest rank available, etc. If you want to call yourself something different, i.e., Ebon Raven, Ebon Eagle, etc., then you should add that to the end of your rank as an AKA, like so:
Charlie The Destroyer - Order of the Kite [Middle Grade Officer] AKA The Ebon Eagle of Moon Ridge.
